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jean grey 1 of 3
one of the three jean grey things im working on. I do like this one, but its not really what i had in my head. then again, getting anything down accuratly from my head is a huge challenge. this is why i labbelled it WIP
this is the first time i have requested critiques, so be gentle
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© Alex Wynnter (insert present date here)
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one of the three jean grey things im working on. I do like this one, but its not really what i had in my head. then again, getting anything down accuratly from my head is a huge challenge. this is why i labbelled it WIP
this is the first time i have requested critiques, so be gentle
more info
© Alex Wynnter (insert present date here)
Please note or email me for information on use of this image.
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Looks Cool! Here's a few things you could do to improve this (IMHO):
1- Add a little more contrast (not just in value, but also in hue and saturation).
2- Add a little more variation, a shadow on a yellow suit isn't necessarily dark yellow. It could be slightly greenish and more saturated. Or even dark blue (if it's really dark). Vary the hue's and saturation of colors along the values.
3- Her pose looks a little stiff. Mostly because the right arm looks tense but isn't really doing anything. Maybe one of her legs could be lifting, maybe her right arm could be relaxed on the side...
4- The hair is kinda blurry, it needs more definition. Paint more individual strands (varying hue+sat+value ) .
Keep up!
1- Add a little more contrast (not just in value, but also in hue and saturation).
2- Add a little more variation, a shadow on a yellow suit isn't necessarily dark yellow. It could be slightly greenish and more saturated. Or even dark blue (if it's really dark). Vary the hue's and saturation of colors along the values.
3- Her pose looks a little stiff. Mostly because the right arm looks tense but isn't really doing anything. Maybe one of her legs could be lifting, maybe her right arm could be relaxed on the side...
4- The hair is kinda blurry, it needs more definition. Paint more individual strands (varying hue+sat+value ) .
Keep up!